http://christianforums.net/Fellowship/index.php?pages/TOS/
I need to fix the html links, other than that, how does it look?
It looks good. I like the fact that it's been cut down. I don't think it needs more than this...it's very understandable what the forum is intending to create.
I do have a few comments:
1. should "to contact a member of the staff" state "in case of a question"??
2. Are you going to leave "Big Rules" ? How about just Rules?
3. 1.3 "Resist the urge" doesn't sound very smooth. Another way of saying this?
4. 1. 6 Also doesn't sound very smooth...
5. 1.7 "Each member is asked to have
only one account."
should be "only persons".
6. 1.8 "related material"
is allowed.........
7. 1.8 I don't understand what the second part means, but maybe everyone else does!
8. 1.9 Does everyone know what "all links require a 20 post minimum......" means?
9. 1.9 .......approved businesses and sites may advertise there.....
10. 1.13 should be "purpose".
11. 1:14 Does everyone know what TWTS means?
should be "purposes".
should be "whether a member agrees....."
I would have liked to highlight the above on your original, but I couldn't figure out how. Sorry.